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Lights of the North

On the crispy wind-chilled night in a ship beyond the bay Looking northward by wind-swept peaks a blue and green foray We shivered in the northern wind watching toward the sky When suddenly more light appeared coming from on high In awe we sat and watched the show, the curtains of unrest The beauty of the wavy green with red and then some gold To live and watch the show for real was better than we’re told In the distant mountains a shelf of snow broke loose to slide Kicking up a glistening cloud high up into the icy wind to ride The snowy cloud was filled with green fringed with red and white From the aurora up above making for a double show tonight Sun’s energy electrified and coursing through the dark Left some lasting memories that surely made their mark

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 4/30/2015 7:44:00 PM
John, Congratulations on your win. SKAT
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Date: 4/30/2015 10:50:00 AM
An awesome journey of rhymes John! Congrats to you!!!! ;-)
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Date: 4/28/2015 2:46:00 PM
John, Congratulations on your "Aurora And Avalanche" win.... LINDA
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Date: 4/27/2015 7:30:00 PM
Descriptions are so real, it is like looking at a painting !! Well done, John !
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Date: 4/27/2015 1:53:00 PM
Very beautiful John , your discriptive abilities are marvelous a 7! Congratulations on your win! Blessings Eve
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Date: 4/27/2015 8:23:00 AM
Congrad's on your win! Light & Love
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Date: 2/4/2015 12:15:00 AM
G'day John... Nice picture you've painted of the Northern lights John, something I have only seen photos of but never been lucky enough to see. Regards - Lindsay
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John Squires
Date: 2/4/2015 4:37:00 PM
We have never seen them from here either...NE WA. Maybe some day? Hope so. Thanks I appreciate your comment.
Date: 2/3/2015 9:26:00 PM
Just beautiful John... lovely imagery... nads!
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John Squires
Date: 2/4/2015 4:38:00 PM
Thank you so much and much appreciated.

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