Lightning Flashed Heated Air

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Written after a very strong storm which was powered with wind, thunder, and lightning..

Sara

Lightning flashed heated air nitrogen bring Desired raindrops free the earth from love's dust Raining upon the dry earth unjust, just It is only a very tiny thing But when the clouds roll away birds will sing On God the provider they place their trust Even when man from his store throws small crust Today the heavens with jubilation did ring While the lightning flashed man did find rest Tucked away in house, car, or barn over there Out of sight where no one could see In the hot argument of clouds man confessed God I have sinned before you; please forgive me Then be finished with this sordid affair

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Jack Horne

Date: 8/8/2011 11:52:00 AM

Very expressve piece, my friend : )

Nette Onclaud

Date: 8/8/2011 2:28:00 AM

a cool, refreshing offering with wonderful flow, sara.. i like! :) huggs, nette

Elizabeth Wesley

Date: 8/7/2011 10:32:00 PM

Very nice Sara, Your descriptions give verse for the mind. Enjoyed so much.

Don Johnson

Date: 8/7/2011 8:07:00 PM

Without a sin i can't confess, become a shiela wear a dress, nah thats not me, turn n flee hehe well done babe, xo, Don

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 8/7/2011 3:50:00 PM

Well Sara aptly penned my friend for this drought which needs much rain luv.. and God is an all providing God ..Jahovah Jirah .. and HE fashioned all .. an exquisite creative poem my friend..luv..