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Lightning

LIGHTNING '//'/''/////'' lightning electric, frantic, crackling, zooming, glaring howls, high-voltage, winds, mystery foreboding, haunting, scheming creepy, shady omen © --------- Contest: Dane Ann Smith- Johnsen Delving into Diamantes By: nette onclaud

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Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 10/12/2012 9:56:00 AM

I am so thrilled to be able to read some of your amazing poetry today Nette. I hope you have a wonderful weekend. I will be back another day to read through more of your poetry. Love, Carol

Russell Sivey

Date: 11/29/2011 7:36:00 PM

Excellent approach from a "bad" omen through to an electrifying lightning! You put the two together sophisticated like and brilliantly given an air of detail, pleasant to read and to understand poetically! Thank you for giving us a perfect poem!! Honorable Work!!

Joe Maverick

Date: 11/29/2011 4:35:00 PM

Well diplayed words here Nette,enjoyed your 'vision within the form..

Kash Poet

Date: 11/28/2011 6:56:00 PM

A "lightning" Diamante from you Nette.Best wishes.

John Rhinem

Date: 11/28/2011 6:48:00 PM

Sooo Spoooky * Shiver Me Timbers * John!:) ˜