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Lighthouse Tower's Face

lighthouse tower's face now soaking in angry tears of lover ocean Monoku: March 27, 2016 For the contest sponsored by PD

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/2/2016 3:19:00 PM

You did GREAT in the contest. WEll deserved congratulations.

Bl Devnath
Date: 4/2/2016 3:34:00 PM

Thanks my lovely friend for your wishes. Loved always, bl

Eve Roper

Date: 4/1/2016 9:34:00 PM

Wow! Love the emotional feelings on your verse, BL!!!! Congratulations on your win :-)

Bl Devnath
Date: 4/1/2016 11:05:00 PM

Thanks my lovely friend for your beautiful comment. Loved always, bl

Lenny Gazbowski

Date: 4/1/2016 8:20:00 AM

Excellent & Congrats.

Bl Devnath
Date: 4/1/2016 8:21:00 AM

Thanks my lovely friend. Loved always, bl

Hansteven Selfa

Date: 4/1/2016 8:00:00 AM

When you write BL, I really feel your overflowing passion in writing! You inspire so many people with your works and I'm so lucky I'm one of them! Thank you so much! Congratulations! :) _HANS

Bl Devnath
Date: 4/1/2016 8:03:00 AM

Thanks my lovely friend for your much appreciation. i alwats being inpired by all of you here in P.S. You have a very heart so you are saying this beautiful words of love. Loved always, bl

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 4/1/2016 1:58:00 AM

Congrats on ur superb win with this lovely write BL..

Bl Devnath
Date: 4/1/2016 2:23:00 AM

Thanks my lovely friend. Loved always, bl

Timothy Hicks

Date: 3/31/2016 11:35:00 PM

A surprisingly emotive take, BL. Angry tears of lover ocean ... mother nature is often paradoxical! Congrats on your win, my friend!

Bl Devnath
Date: 4/1/2016 12:58:00 AM

Thanks my lovely friend. Loved always, bl

Joseph May

Date: 3/31/2016 10:29:00 PM

Congrats on your win BL...

Bl Devnath
Date: 4/1/2016 12:57:00 AM

Thanks my lovely friend for your wishes. Loved always, bl

Paul Callus

Date: 3/31/2016 6:45:00 AM

Yours is an emotional take on this visual, BL. Could be that the ocean lover is in an abusive relationship! Congrats on a lovely win! // paul

Bl Devnath
Date: 3/31/2016 1:05:00 PM

Yes, you have rightly caught my feeling which was written with my simple emotional heart. Please read the reply given to P.D. below. You are genius as always, i can feel that my lovely friend. Loved always, bl

Rizwana Bhurani

Date: 3/31/2016 3:27:00 AM

Lovely.....Congratulations

Bl Devnath
Date: 3/31/2016 1:01:00 PM

Thanks my lovely friend for your wishes. Loved always, bl

Teddy Kimathi

Date: 3/31/2016 2:23:00 AM

I love the personification of your line!!! Congrats BL, for your WIN in the contest!!! ;-)

Bl Devnath
Date: 3/31/2016 1:01:00 PM

Thanks my lovely friend for your wishes. Loved always, bl

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/31/2016 12:27:00 AM

Hi :) BL, Congratulations on your Awesome Win. Stop by my blog "Invading," if you'd like. Drop a smile and tell me a little about your Monoku :) Always & Forever ~LINDA~

Bl Devnath
Date: 3/31/2016 12:58:00 PM

Thanks my lovely friend for giving me a placement in this contest among beautiful winner poets. i smile always and try to keep it up by bringing sweet smile of all loved beings faces including you my *friend of always. My monoku is very simply written on how i felt. Light Hose is meant for helping to the sailors, captains and many other people. If the light house is in danger how it will help others? In the angry tears of ocean it's soaked with passion, where personification is used indirectly. Thanks for asking me to tell a little about it. Loved always, bl

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/27/2016 6:27:00 PM

VERY nicely done, BL

Bl Devnath
Date: 3/27/2016 6:33:00 PM

Thanks my lovely friend for your appreciation. Loved always, bl