Light-Play

Flickering shadows dance around and around; light and shadow waltz. Sitting under a tree in a cool breeze; shadows ever-changing. While leaves whisper on the breeze; how I enjoy the light- play.

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

Date: 4/15/2015 8:03:00 PM

the imagery is wonderful!!! Awesome!!~olive eloisa

M. L. Kiser
Date: 4/16/2015 8:43:00 AM

Many thanks for your kind comments and visits.

M. L. Kiser
Date: 4/16/2015 8:40:00 AM

Many thanks for your wonderful comments. Glad that you stopped by.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 4/14/2015 2:55:00 PM

Great Sijo..I enjoyed reading this one today..Thanks for stopping by..Sara

M. L. Kiser
Date: 4/16/2015 8:41:00 AM

The same to you, Sara...you comments are greatly appreciated, as is your poetry. I am enjoying this Soup.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/13/2015 6:18:00 PM

It can be very interesting to watch at certain times of day. Very nice, M.L!

M. L. Kiser
Date: 4/14/2015 9:01:00 AM

Indeed it can. Thanks for commenting, Andrea.

Eileen Manassian

Date: 4/13/2015 10:08:00 AM

How I enjoyed this lovely Sijo. They aren't easy to write. Beautiful. Thank you for your visit. Hugs

M. L. Kiser
Date: 4/14/2015 9:02:00 AM

I love the Sijo form of poetry; it seems to be one of my best forms. Anyway, I'm glad that you came by to read and comment.