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Light Energy Parise Pariku

"Parise Pariku" a halo of existence loving energy received quiet, I dwell, holy light and so this simple love is found complete.... ___________________ I promised to write a Pariku once my Contest was full, I COULDN'T WAIT!!!!! If you haven't entered please give it a try / a few spots left / see contest details

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Caryl Muzzey

Date: 1/4/2011 11:36:00 AM

A wonderful write. Caryl

John Rhinem

Date: 1/3/2011 8:12:00 PM

Smile ~ This is a very wonderful painting "My 'Dear Precious & Priceless Friend, Rick Parise!!!'" ~ The still waters of peaceful tranquilities gifts of something perhaps as, a soul-felt love ~ "Beautiful Reflection Atop The Canvas Thus Painted Bright" ~ "My Love & Warmth to 'You & Yours,' Always," John! ~ Smile, "Have A Very 'Blessed & Beautiful' Tomorrow My Dear Friend, Amid 'The Glowing Whispering Halos of, Beautiful Love;' Happy New Year;" Bye!:) ~

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 1/3/2011 5:24:00 PM

Yes both dates now... there are two..one at the top... showing your deadline date... then at the bottom after u finalize... there is another date u must key in to match the top date now... then the captcha letters and then the winners list appears... so u now know for your own contest luv..

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 1/3/2011 5:11:00 PM

You have nicely exemplified your new form of Pariku. The last line is the essence of three lines like the third line of the haiku. Rick

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 1/3/2011 4:37:00 PM

Going to try it again.. this is only the second time I have had trouble.. it officially closed on Jan. 12th .. the dates are correct and it has been finalized.. do I change the date on the bottom too?

Sara Kendrick

Date: 1/3/2011 4:30:00 PM

Good one..I am glad that I stopped by to see what you had to say in your own form..Sara

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 1/3/2011 4:28:00 PM

Wonderful words Rick to example your Pariku contest ... good luck at judging time .. I am still having quite a problem getting my TOYLAND contest to post... no matter what I do it does not seem to post.. TPS said to change the dates ..I did ..but still nothing.. any suggestions my friend to rescue the "Sweetheart"??