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Lifting the Fog

Damp, misty low clouds Swirling, entwining every tree Quietness prevades In the sky an opening Light pierces lifting the fog Inspired by Andrea Dietrich

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Peter Dome

Date: 1/5/2014 7:52:00 AM

Wonderful writing, great visuals. Love it.. very well done, best wishes. Pete.

Joe Maverick

Date: 12/23/2013 2:41:00 PM

And the light shines indeed Sara, just looking you up, before i leave in the early morning..'

James Fraser

Date: 12/23/2013 12:51:00 PM

Fine poem Sara, describing scenes witnessed by many as nature shows her craft, James :)

Jancarl Campi

Date: 12/23/2013 6:21:00 AM

I like this poem. I do enjoy watching the fog at times. It can be so very mysterious. You painted a very beautiful picture here. Thanks for posting. Jancarl

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 12/23/2013 12:25:00 AM

Wonderful picture you have created of the fog lifting, sara

Jon Arno

Date: 12/22/2013 7:00:00 PM

Wonderful write Sara...I enjoyed this very much. Merry Christmas Jon

Russell Sivey

Date: 12/22/2013 5:45:00 PM

This is a brilliant write my friend! I am surely impressed by your descriptions of the fog and what it does both before and after the sun! I love the peacefulness that this poem expresses throughout it! What a beautiful piece Sara, Awesome Work!!