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Lifted

( LIFTED ) Today your spirit it came and lifted A huge burden from my shoulders you shifted Pulling me out from this dark deep hole Making me feel like I have more control To me the relief is so immense My life now makes much more sense I knew you would come to take it away I just had to be patient until this day I knew you would come to make it alright You have given me insight into my life With this burden lifted I no longer have to fight My mum my saviour my guiding light

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 11/14/2014 8:48:00 AM
A beautifully written poem. Very touching.
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Jasmine Cruz
Date: 11/15/2014 6:34:00 AM
Thank you Maurice. Have a nice day

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