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Lifestyles of Four Tropical Birds

Pretty pink plumage, Roseate Spoonbills delightfully spooning. Majestic Osprey…hatchlings chirping in the nest, Fishes flip in parents’ talons, fast food, flying free. Homestead refurbishment, the parents never rest. Incubation has become a pleasant memory, Perched on a pinnacle, proud parents, near the sea. The Great White Egrets, Leisurely walking, talking. Reminiscing. No regrets. Wading warm waters. Fear for future hatchlings’ cry. Diminishing, wetlands die. Purple Gallinule’s graceful gliding. Survives gators; quickly hiding! © May 9, 2011 Dane Smith-Johnsen Written for Poetry Soup Member Contest: For (Four) Beautiful Birds Sponsored by: ~ Constance La France ~ ~ A Rambling Poet ~ ~

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Date: 6/3/2011 4:14:00 PM
Congratulations on your win...Sara
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Date: 6/2/2011 2:51:00 PM
Congratulations on the in Constance's contest Dane Anne!
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Date: 6/1/2011 9:34:00 PM
love how you went the "tropical route" for yours,Dane Ann. My favorite part is where you describe the egrets. Congrats in the contest.Luv, Andrea
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Date: 6/1/2011 1:38:00 PM
Wow Dane an absolutly beautiful piece congrats on your win.~LOTS OF LUV~Teresa
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Date: 6/1/2011 7:53:00 AM
Congratulations on the win in the contest of constance, Dane
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Date: 6/1/2011 6:23:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved win in Constance's "For (Four) Beautful Birds"contest Dane Ann. Love, Carol
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Date: 5/31/2011 9:35:00 PM
Congratulations Dane Ann, on your placement in my contest with this awesome poem~~
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Date: 5/31/2011 9:33:00 PM
so nicely done, dane.. … raving KUDOS to you for the special win :) huggs
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Date: 5/31/2011 8:45:00 PM
Congrats Dane Ann on your marvelous win in four birds contest with this beautiful entry luv.. enjoy..another sweet success..
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Date: 5/12/2011 3:48:00 AM
so many dazzling images here, dane... i feel like i'm in a paradise with lots of rainbow-filled birds, without the alligator, please..:) sumptuous! happy winning streaks to you! ...huggs, nette
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Date: 5/10/2011 9:09:00 AM
Dear Dane, I admire the Osprey painting you created each day when I wake up. I fear for the future of many creatures as our wetlands are lost to construction. Now you should take a lesson from the purple gallinule and learn how to hide from gators. As I said, photograph them through the window of the car! Love you, Carolyn
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Date: 5/9/2011 1:29:00 PM
Thank you for supporting my contest, soup mail in a moment~~
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Date: 5/9/2011 8:32:00 AM
four lovely species of birds Dane Ann.. vivid and creative visuals to tempt the reader to enjoy this lovely write..good luck in the contest my friend.. an awesome selection of feathered friends...
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