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Life's Pattern - Referential Contest

Life is like a pure glass goblet Molded from the beginning Etchings are added like memories Each one carefully placed Home is represented by a firm line Showing the beginning of life Followed by the ups an downs of growing up Here the pattern begins Love and marriage follows next Children added to life's  total The hearts and tiny flowers Are etched upon the glass Old age quickly follows The etcher with expertise Entwines the flowing line So that the picture is all as one Life's pattern is etched for eternity Unless carelessness causes  the glass  to be shattered, gone for evermore. Inspired by : Figure Fusion written by Robb Kopp Penned 30 June 2013

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Date: 7/18/2013 10:12:00 PM
Seren, Nice to see you on Debbie Guzzi, winning list...... Congratulations! Hugs* SKAT
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Seren Roberts
Date: 7/18/2013 10:36:00 PM
Wow Thsnks SKAT for stopping by....Seren
Date: 7/17/2013 5:39:00 AM
'Life is like a pure glass goblet'...WOW...I know you are an artist and you have painted a beautiful, wisdom filled word picture here...Love the way you add the etchings to the goblet too...Congratulations Seren - Tim
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Date: 7/17/2013 2:02:00 PM
Thank you Tim and for the compliment, calling me an artust..../Seren
Date: 6/30/2013 11:24:00 AM
Hi Seren, please add the poets name who write Figure Fusion on the bottom so folks will know. THANKS Light & Love
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Date: 6/30/2013 1:19:00 PM
thank you have done so ...seren
Date: 6/30/2013 4:40:00 AM
Beautifully expressed truths of our lives patterns-- "shattered glass" cane so often turn to shattered dreams. Good luck for the competition.
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Seren Roberts
Date: 6/30/2013 4:45:00 AM
Thank you Kim.. Yes the truth is in the poem ...Seren

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