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Lifelong Comrade

If I said I love you would you be mad? I do recall our fight and I am sad. It does not erase the good times we had. What we share is real and not some fad. I have loved you since you were a young lad. You remind me of a great man, my dad. Babe, I want to be your lifelong comrade. Becoming your new bride would make me glad. 08-27-16

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Teddy Kimathi

Date: 8/31/2016 8:53:00 AM

Congrats Alexis, for your placement with this brilliant piece!! ;-)

Lu Loo

Date: 8/30/2016 3:40:00 PM

Alexis, so cute lovely lady...congrats on your placement! :)-luloo

Paul Callus

Date: 8/30/2016 2:59:00 PM

How could he be mad at you, Alexis!:) I can already hear those lovely wedding bells! Congrats on this fine win!! Regards // paul

Seren Roberts

Date: 8/29/2016 11:46:00 PM

congrats Alexis, great write....Seren

Lin Lane

Date: 8/29/2016 6:54:00 PM

A nice rhyming verse, Alexis. Congratulations to you!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/29/2016 5:45:00 PM

I really enjoyed reading your monorhyme, Alexis!

Probir Gupta

Date: 8/28/2016 6:43:00 AM

Very well written ... Great monorhyme ...

Lynn Marie

Date: 8/28/2016 1:03:00 AM

This is very endearing Alexis..I really like "lifelong comrade"..it speaks to a true union..that whatever life deals you..you will soldier through and onward together.:-) A lovely poem :-) blessings and hugs to you, lynn

Roy Willetts

Date: 8/27/2016 11:31:00 PM

I like your poem very much. It talks about the life of couples as they go though life. I pray your dreams always come true. Keep writing.