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Life To Death - Today's Contest

Life Living Awaiting Being in love Casting away doubt Giving and receiving All unconditionally Leading to a happy marriage Besotted so in love, life entwined Until deaths sting strikes it's unwanted blow Penned 4 April 2014

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Leotis Hargrove

Date: 2/14/2022 9:30:00 PM

Loving poem! Am a fan now. Thank you for sharing! Please keep up the great work of art. Don't stop writing!

Carrie Richards

Date: 4/5/2014 9:00:00 PM

I love seeing this form unfold....from beginning to end, you have taken us on a journey! Another great work! Ps.....I'm so grateful Seren, that you gave me a reminder and the push to hurry my poem before your last contest closed. Thank you so much, and it is such a great surprise to be in the list of winning poems! Thank you very much.....sometimes I need that kick in the behind !!! LOL !!! Thanks so much!!

Seren Roberts
Date: 4/6/2014 3:08:00 AM

Thanks Carrie, for commenting on this poem, plus for writing such an excellent poem for my contest, You deserved to be on the winning list.....Seren

Jan Allison

Date: 4/4/2014 11:53:00 AM

Fabulous life cycle poem in a few short lines. really enjoyed reading it Jan xx

Seren Roberts
Date: 4/4/2014 12:16:00 PM

Thanks Jan, glad you enjoyed it. I quite like this form, that's the second one I have attempted.....Seren.

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 4/4/2014 9:11:00 AM

Dear Seren, This is the story of many people's lives. So glad you had a happy marriage. I have experienced that sting you describe and it stays with you a long time. I sent you a Soup mail, but I know what is wrong with my poem and will fix it today. Thanks for letting me know. I had to reread the directions a few times. Getting old isn't for sissies. LOL Best wishes, Carolyn

Seren Roberts
Date: 4/4/2014 12:15:00 PM

No Carolyn I am single. I am glad you realised why I was trying to contact you...Hope I get to the old stage ....LOL...Seren

Russell Sivey

Date: 4/4/2014 5:45:00 AM

Did you change it cause I don't notice any change unless its something in the 8th or 9th line...I don't remember completely your previous poem, but I think there's something different there! Anyway, I love this poem, it is one of your best writes my friend! It was nice to read it again, Great Work!!

Seren Roberts
Date: 4/6/2014 3:09:00 AM

no just had to re-submit cos it wasn't showing on the list for entering it into the contest, Happened to 2 of my poems...Seren

Seren Roberts

Date: 4/4/2014 4:01:00 AM

Sorry about losing the comments. Had to re-submit.