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Life R1

Life- Randomling 1 Logic of life I could not decipher, Vivid thoughts turned me hyper, Driven deep in a whirlpool, I might be the biggest fool ! Written Sept 2nd, 2015 For contest by Mary

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Michael Tor

Date: 9/2/2015 10:15:00 AM

If that's the case were all fools. Lol. We all react to a stimuli. Sometimes we react with anger and Logic looses to emotion. Loved this write. Very true. Then there is forgiveness and that's another topic...

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 9/2/2015 5:22:00 AM

Wonderfully done , Dr. Upma. Accepting ignorance is a sign of wisdom. Some hours before I wrote something along the same lines.

Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 9/2/2015 5:36:00 AM

Thnx Demetrios my dear friend, I shall Hv to check out yours !!