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Life Pill

The pill of life would cost, I fear, Much more than I can pay, But I still hope there will be one For saving lives some day. A pill that conquers all disease And takes all pain away, I know, somewhere, some super brain, Strong willed enough to stay Is working on this superb pill. I hope there’s no delay, For I’m fast falling all apart Like fabled one-horse shay. Februzry 2, 2013 For Pill of Life Contest

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Date: 2/26/2013 4:23:00 PM
Congratulations joyce
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Date: 2/26/2013 1:55:00 PM
Hello Joyce, , a nice winning poem..thank you for sharing..LINDA
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Date: 2/24/2013 10:12:00 AM
Many congratulations Joyce luv xx
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Date: 2/23/2013 8:37:00 PM
Such a wish we all hope for........I'm afraid it won't be in my lifetime, but perhaps someday such a pill will cure all ills. We can always dream can't we? A cute poem, Joyce!! Congratulations!
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Date: 2/23/2013 8:27:00 PM
Congrats Joyce ....Seren
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Date: 2/12/2013 11:46:00 AM
Like the humor in your entry..Reads like a winner to me..Good job..Thanks for stopping by..Sara
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 2/12/2013 11:49:00 AM
Soup mail for you..Sara
Date: 2/4/2013 11:03:00 PM
Joyce, yours is better than mine. this contest idea just killed me. I hope to see this high on the winner list. It's a good one.
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