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Life Or Death

Life Or Death In my immaturity humiliations embarrassed me to death, yet I yearned to live. October 23, 2016 For Laura Loo Second Place- Contest 3 ( Submitted and judged on October 14, 2016 Life Or Death)

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Alexis Y.

Date: 10/15/2016 2:31:00 PM

Hi Balveen, There is much truth in a few words.Congratulations on your fine win:-) Alexis

Balveen Cheema
Date: 10/15/2016 2:35:00 PM

Thanks Alexis! You've done well for yourself, too! Balveen

Sandra Haight

Date: 10/14/2016 6:32:00 PM

The will to live is so powerful, Balveen. Nicely expressed, and congratulations on your placement. Hugs, Sandra

Balveen Cheema
Date: 10/14/2016 7:52:00 PM

Many thanks, Sandra! Balveen