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Souls transcend mere mortal flesh and bone Opening the door to the unknown. Until death is visited upon you, Life and reality remain true. One day, you'll see a tunnel of light, and it'll be exquisitely bright. Its brilliance shall eliminate night, and all your misgivings shall take flight. But, there might be a moment of fright approaching this miraculous sight. And you may be unsure of your plight, but in your heart, you'll know it's alright. It'll feel surreal when hurts heal, yet you'll soon realize it is real. Anxiously sorting sins to atone, souls transcend mere mortal flesh and bone. (Acrostic/Rhyme) 2/3/2016

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Date: 5/26/2018 9:05:00 PM
Love it, Emile.
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Date: 5/27/2018 7:34:00 AM
Thanks Line, I appreciate your support my friend, Emile.
Date: 2/12/2016 8:47:00 AM
Thanks for the reply
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Date: 2/12/2016 6:32:00 AM
Emily, Congratulations on your win using Life or Death theme in such a compassionate and inspiring way!
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Date: 2/12/2016 8:39:00 AM
Thanks Susan, your comments and support are most appreciated. Emile.
Date: 2/11/2016 10:37:00 PM
EMILE, CONGRATS, on your "pairing master rhyme, winning poem. **LINDA**
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Date: 2/12/2016 8:38:00 AM
Thanks LINDA, your comments and support are most appreciated. Emile.
Date: 2/11/2016 9:28:00 PM
Very lovely.. congrats on win with this awesome write Emile. Loved the pic as well.. great philosophical write.
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Date: 2/12/2016 8:38:00 AM
Thanks Upma, your comments and support are most appreciated. Emile.
Date: 2/11/2016 6:09:00 PM
Hi Emile: I love your transition from Body to Soul and it is surreal! Congratulations, !
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Date: 2/12/2016 8:37:00 AM
Thanks Ralph, your comments and support are most appreciated. Emile.
Date: 2/11/2016 4:38:00 PM
Dropping back with my congrats Emile:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 2/12/2016 8:37:00 AM
Thanks Jan, I appreciate it. Emile.
Date: 2/3/2016 10:15:00 PM
Emile, so beautifully, skillfully and wonderfully penned, a winner for me ~
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Date: 2/4/2016 8:28:00 AM
Thanks so much Broken, your comments are most appreciated. Emile.
Date: 2/3/2016 7:32:00 PM
In faith so true. We do transcend. Well put rhyme. Good luck in contest
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Date: 2/4/2016 8:29:00 AM
Thanks John, your comments are appreciated. Emile.
Date: 2/3/2016 4:51:00 PM
Excellent Emile. This write puts you there. Love your description, in your words. Well done my friend. Sorry I have been away.
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Date: 2/4/2016 8:30:00 AM
Thanks so much Michael, welcome back your presence has been missed my friend. Emile.
Date: 2/3/2016 4:00:00 PM
Well done Emile Silent one has set a real challenge with this contest - good luck:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 2/4/2016 8:33:00 AM
Thanks so much Jan, yes a real challenge indeed, your comments are always appreciated my friend. Emile.

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