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Life On the Dock

Like silent sentries in a row the pylon docks await my arrival. It is low tide as I step onto the gangway. Crusty barnacles cling tenaciously to the pylons as salt sea water laps the rocky shoreline. A lanky blue heron carefully picks it's way between the fingers of the dock slips. A cool breeze picks up and the boats respond bobbing to and fro. Halyard lines clang against the masts of sailboats as weather vanes turn toward the prevailing northwest winds. The pungent smell of salt air and the cool mist against my face evoke thoughts of escape and high sea adventures. To sail away without a care and maybe never to return. The glories of the ocean breeze waft gently over my sun kissed face. Prism rays draw me toward the lapping shoreline, and I feel young and free. This place is where I am truly me where my spirit is released, and as I breathe in the fresh salt air I give myself over to the sea. Written on 4/19/2007

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Date: 5/31/2016 8:47:00 AM
This is beautiful writing Laura, sorry I'm late trying to catch up. A7
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Laura Leiser
Date: 6/1/2016 1:16:00 AM
Thanks, John, for your kind words, and giving me the high rating :)
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Laura Leiser
Date: 6/1/2016 1:13:00 AM
Thanks, John, for your kind words, and giving me the high rating :)
Date: 1/13/2015 11:51:00 PM
I've been there! And I like that free verse.
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Laura Leiser
Date: 1/14/2015 12:01:00 AM
Thanks, Bill. I love to experience life near the ocean. I appreciate your comment!
Date: 11/20/2014 2:43:00 PM
What a lovely poem. I am truly surprised that i am the first to comment.
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Laura Leiser
Date: 11/20/2014 3:33:00 PM
Thank you! I appreciate you reading it! :)

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