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Life Like a Road

Everyone enjoys to take a ride or just to go for a leisure stride. Long winding road Wide and free or a narrow straight route Lure to the eye and for a try promising pile of trees on pied each a natural beauty pride. Lights... Signals on both sides Providing travelers a guide Keeping them always on safe side... Our BREATH of LIFE is like a ROAD Each passing night and day there's a heavy or light load Sometimes a mystery with a puzzle code Each one efforts careful to decode Thanks, THERE IS GOD that abides... ALWAYS THERE NEVER ON UNDISCOVERABLE HIDE Through all blessings and trials tide. Bumps and accidents slowing Even stopping the glide Problems buffering life's tide... Ethics, justice and society snide they may equal to a lie Whatever comes however things maybe Don't stop; Keep going. Even on a Dark cocoon... KEEP BELIEVING! KEEP WIN- NING! a road like never ending until it reaches a happening may it be a grand or simple celebration of life what is essential... YOU PASSED EACH WAY LIKE IT'S YOUR LAST LIKE - IT - IS - YOUR- LAST NOT SAVING THE BEST FOR LAST.. so I never stopped.. Despite heartaches.. Hardships I went through.. I hold on..I keep moving.. Growing..loving.. For at the end of this road there - face to face at last with my Creator. (C) olive_eloi 10:29am REVISED: MAY 05, 2014 -------------------»»»» Contest: Just down the road Sponsor: Kelly Dreschler 3rd Place.. Praise GOd.. :D

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Date: 11/24/2014 12:07:00 PM
Life can be a path, road, and sometimes it's a 'Hard Road' but it's what one makes of it, James.....
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Date: 5/23/2014 9:20:00 PM
wonderful win, Olive....SKAT
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Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 6/10/2014 2:35:00 PM
thanks much Skat.. :)
Date: 5/20/2014 1:06:00 AM
It's a nice take on the theme of the contest. Congrats on the win, olive
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Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 5/20/2014 3:46:00 PM
thanks much sir.. :)
Date: 5/19/2014 4:03:00 PM
Congratulations Olive_eloi :)) This caught me by surprise! Did not even know you had posted it. I love how your faith wends its way through all the ups and downs of life till eventually it comes to the eternal haven. A worthy winner :) // paul
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Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 5/20/2014 3:47:00 PM
tHanks much PAul.. :) love your comments.. :D
Date: 5/19/2014 9:04:00 AM
whooo,, so creative, olive.. go mga noypis!.. big cheers on your win!.. huggs
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Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 5/20/2014 3:49:00 PM
thanks Nette,, :) GBU
Date: 5/18/2014 9:42:00 PM
This is well written Olive. Congratulations on your high marks in Kelly's contest. Verlena
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Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 5/19/2014 3:02:00 AM
Thank you Verlena :) GBU
Date: 5/18/2014 7:47:00 PM
Someone is always there, even when we walk this road alone.... This is a very nice write, Olive Eloisa! I loved the structure, very creative! Congrats on your win!
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Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 5/19/2014 3:03:00 AM
Thank You Kelly.. :) GBU
Date: 1/18/2014 6:54:00 PM
Very good inspirational writing friend. Thanks for the reminder of it.
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Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 1/19/2014 1:41:00 PM
:) THANKS FOR DROPPING BY AGAIN :) nice to read some comments. :)

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