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Life Lesson

I can write a sonnet in a moment and with that I pretty much sum my life. I spot a comet in the firmanent, that bare covers wasted effort and strife. I look at a life that is sore lacking, and wonder at how I avoid substance. I run to and fro without much slacking. It is a cover for an empty dance. I seem to be always pushing the edge. I know well it is the wrong edge to push. Rail against those who push me to the ledge, knowing I gave a target ripe and lush. I long to do work that is remembered, live a life with no excuses tendered

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Date: 1/14/2010 11:34:00 AM
Congratulations on your featured poem of the week! Laura :)
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Date: 1/12/2010 11:28:00 AM
Beautifully written, Ahellas.
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Date: 1/11/2010 1:48:00 PM
Many congratulations on your well deserved poetry being featured this week >> James
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Date: 1/11/2010 8:24:00 AM
Thankk you for sharing your very expressive sonnet, Ahellas. Lainie
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Date: 1/11/2010 4:47:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved poetry being featured this week Ahellas. Love, Carol
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Date: 1/10/2010 3:57:00 PM
Congrats on your amazing feature poem this week! Very well deserved as always. Truly enjoyed reading. Happy New Year! Love Light Patty
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Date: 1/10/2010 1:25:00 PM
Nice use of rhyme. I really like your closing line. Congratulations on having your poem featured. I wish you ongoing success with your writing. Karen
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Date: 1/10/2010 11:52:00 AM
Many congrats on your wonderful piece being featured this week. Rgds Janette
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