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Life Is a Bird

This life is a bird and we are it's feathers This bird becomes strong and withstands all weather It's wings expand wider when we stick together Then this bird we call life takes us much further

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 7/20/2012 7:00:00 PM
I really like how you envision this Carmen. I want to see you write more on this topic!
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Carmen Castro
Date: 7/21/2012 2:36:00 AM
These lines belonged to another poem I wrote... It just didn't fit changed the lines on the other poem and figured these few lines could stand on there own : )
Date: 6/28/2012 2:13:00 AM
Lovely composed Carmen, like it a lot. - oxox Anne-Lise
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Date: 6/27/2012 5:30:00 PM
An enchanting write, Carmen. A beautiful description of life. -Mohammad
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Carmen Castro
Date: 6/27/2012 10:30:00 PM
Glad you liked it Mohammed : )
Date: 6/27/2012 3:53:00 PM
Together we stand...and divided we fall. Peace and blessings to you Carmen.
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Carmen Castro
Date: 6/27/2012 10:30:00 PM
Likewise Steven

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