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Life Deceives

do not forsake me
all i did was make you feel
love is forever.

© Harry J Horsman 2013  

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  1. Date: 6/7/2013 8:39:00 AM
    This is a clever summary of so many things. Enjoyed the read.

  1. Date: 6/3/2013 8:30:00 AM
    Read it again....loved it again! Just stopping by to say...HEY HARRY! :)

  1. Date: 6/2/2013 3:24:00 PM
    Do they even deserve it? :/

  1. Date: 6/2/2013 5:48:00 AM
    Hi Harry top senryu my friend enjoyed the thought, all the best Owen

  1. Date: 6/2/2013 4:09:00 AM
    A great message of love on this great write of yours my dear friend Harry. I like it. Thank you so much for sharing! Have a wonderful weekend! love/ hugs, Leonora

  1. Date: 5/30/2013 10:45:00 AM
    Aww shucks...short but so loaded with emotion-- this is sad yet you bring that love alive. Beautiful meaningful write, Harry.

  1. Date: 5/29/2013 12:25:00 PM
    Simple and meaningful. Well done. AO

  1. Date: 5/28/2013 7:24:00 AM
    A wonderful message in so few words. take care, cory

  1. Date: 5/26/2013 9:56:00 PM
    thank you :-)

  1. Date: 5/26/2013 7:21:00 PM
    So beautiful.....our wish for forever. SuZ

  1. Date: 5/26/2013 11:45:00 AM
    Very potent words Harry and so true! Hugs

  1. Date: 5/25/2013 4:28:00 PM
    sentimental as love itself... stunning, you do paint your words as if you used a brush...:) huggs

  1. Date: 5/25/2013 9:03:00 AM
    So romantic it hurts.

  1. Date: 5/25/2013 8:33:00 AM
    How romatic and yet sorrowful? nice poem

  1. Date: 5/25/2013 12:38:00 AM
    Oh gosh, Harry is BACK and with another romantic senryu. thanks for letting me know you were back today, Harry.

  1. Date: 5/24/2013 8:42:00 PM
    The power of love sometimes feels like it hangs on a are absolutely right on the money with this beautifully expressed Senryu...

  1. Date: 5/24/2013 1:45:00 PM
    Ahhh!!So romantic..Enjoyed reading this one today..Thanks for stopping by..Your comments were encouraging..Sara

  1. Date: 5/24/2013 1:36:00 PM
    Soulful haiku, depth of love reality in true sense. Loved always, bl

  1. Date: 5/24/2013 12:25:00 PM
    The soul is a temple And love is it's solar light And you are the feather That blew into twilight I just received my quotient of love, Bless you, Harry xxx

  1. Date: 5/24/2013 10:51:00 AM
    As Ilene says could there be anything better, I think not, love it harry xx