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Life Cycle of a Leaf

Fresh spring green was I when first born Upon a sunny late March morn But a deeper emerald I became Drenched by April’s pounding rain All summer long I held my own Granting reprieves with shadows thrown For picnics I provided shade Feeling such joy as children played But bodies change as seasons pass Now multi-hues I have amassed Yellow, amber and crimson red But I still hung as others fled The nearby oak is now stripped bare Upon the soil my mates lay there Maple leaves too have joined the pile And I’m the last to stay awhile Many colors adorn below Paths where fall hikers like to go I’m in God’s hands; he holds the keys But oh, dear Lord, here comes a breeze *20 lines

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 7/18/2012 4:07:00 PM
Congrad's Couldn't be in better comapny. Light & Love
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Date: 10/13/2011 1:59:00 PM
Such a brilliant ending line Carolyn. Congrats on a lovely verse. Agape, Moses
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Date: 10/12/2011 4:58:00 PM
such a sweet chuckle of an ending! congrad's light & love
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Date: 10/12/2011 2:01:00 PM
Well done, such a beautiful poem. Carolyn, you always write such great poems. I hope you have these published soon. They are a great keepsake. Love Lee
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Date: 10/12/2011 10:48:00 AM
Such heart in this beautiful poem, Carolyn, the deep melancholy makes me ponder and remember those I've loved, who lie beneath the leaves. Just breathtaking. (Should have placed higher!) Best wishes and congrats!
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Date: 10/12/2011 10:43:00 AM
Love this Carolyn. Reality with just a touch of humor. Congratulations
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Date: 10/12/2011 7:56:00 AM
Congratulations on your winning poem in my contest "Leaves Leaves Leaves" judged today 10/12/2011. Thank you for your support of my contest Carolyn. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/8/2011 2:24:00 PM
YES, we were thinking along the same lines and you did a wonderful write Carolyn. Fall is a sad time as I look at the barren trees for winter is a long season and my least favorite. love phyl
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Date: 10/7/2011 5:23:00 PM
As a science major, I love anything that is entitiled LIFE CYCLE! lol...I just finished reading Robert Hinshaw's entry..You two think alike and spin it completely differently. Throughout your write, as the tree maturates, so does its behavior and those who enjoy it...from lil ones...to the fall hikers. I AM ONE OF THOSE FALL HIKERS!! So many great lines..love the blending of maple and oak leaves.....oh, here comes a breeeeze....exhilarating. Love, Gwendolen
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Date: 10/7/2011 5:24:00 PM
Do u have a sister who is also on PS? .....
Date: 10/6/2011 10:27:00 PM
Somewhat of an abrubt ending Carolyn, O well time to fall apart into open arms as a heavenly substance Agape, Moses
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Date: 10/6/2011 4:15:00 PM
VERY nice, CArolyn. Great idea for personification and I loved the ending of this one! Hope it does great in the contest. I hope I am not going to be late for this contest!
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Date: 10/6/2011 3:45:00 PM
Very nice personification of a leaf with changing of seasons....enjoyed.
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Date: 10/5/2011 1:37:00 PM
This is so cute! Kim
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Date: 10/5/2011 10:18:00 AM
What a great idea, to compare your life to that of a leaf! Let's hope that breeze leaves you on the tree for a good while yet. A surefire winner, love. Many congrats on your wins too, of course
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Date: 10/5/2011 8:57:00 AM
Thank you for supporting my contest Carolyn. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/5/2011 7:34:00 AM
A good, inventive write. It could be viewed as an allegory...good broad space for interpretation! Love, Robert.
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Date: 10/5/2011 4:03:00 AM
Congrats for your win. Here in your write last line touched me much. Thanks for sharing. Good day. bl
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Date: 10/4/2011 4:07:00 PM
i mean this contest..
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Date: 10/4/2011 4:06:00 PM
A very poignant and full write Carolyn, enriching by your words and thoughts the pages we read, all the best in your contest.
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Date: 10/4/2011 3:37:00 PM
Like the dash of humor in the end..Enjoyed reading this afternoon..Reads like winning material to me..Good luck in Carol's contest..It should be a good one with many great writes..Thanks for the understanding of my Limerick..Sara
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Date: 10/4/2011 2:04:00 PM
Great writing Carolyn. I think you and I were entering at the same time. Love, Joyce
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