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Life Blown Out

Life Blown out. I fit in the palm of a hand a tiny miracle extinguished No mummy cuddles, no little pink dress, just death. What did I do wrong, my life blown out like a flame . And all because daddy hit mummy again. It wasn't my fault, I was not to blame. Seems daddy hit the drink and mummy and me. His tears will not bring me back or wipe away his shame. and he will spend the rest of his life in jail. Poor mummy lost her daughter. Mummy lost her love But mummy found his gun, BANG ! And now theirs only me. Words Drowned In Tears Poetry - Poetry Contest 19/10/2016 ________________________________¶1¶1111111¶_______ ________¶¶111¶_______________¶¶¶¶111111111¶¶¶1____ _____¶1¶¶¶¶¶111111¶_________¶¶¶1¶¶¶11111111¶1¶¶___ ___¶¶¶1¶1111111111¶¶1______¶¶1¶¶¶1111111111111¶¶¶_ __¶¶1¶¶1111111111111¶¶_____¶¶¶1¶¶¶¶1111111111111¶_ __¶¶_¶1111111111111111¶¶___¶¶¶¶¶¶11¶111111111111¶_ _11_¶11111111111111111¶¶_____¶¶¶¶__¶111111111111¶¶ ¶¶¶¶1111111111111111¶¶¶¶_____1¶¶__11111111111111¶¶ ¶¶¶¶11111111111¶¶¶¶¶¶¶______1¶1¶¶11111111111111¶1_ ¶¶1¶1111111111111¶¶¶¶¶¶_____¶¶¶¶¶¶1111111111111¶¶_ ¶¶11111111111111111111111¶¶___¶¶¶¶¶¶1111111111¶¶¶_ _1¶111111111111111111¶¶¶¶¶¶____¶¶¶¶11111111111¶1__ __¶¶11111111111111111¶¶¶_____¶¶¶1111111111111¶1___ ___¶¶¶111111111111¶1¶¶¶____1¶¶111¶1111111¶11¶1____ ____1¶¶¶11111111111¶¶¶¶111¶¶¶¶111111111¶11¶¶¶_____ ______¶¶¶¶1111111111111¶¶¶¶1¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶11¶11¶¶_______ _______¶¶¶¶¶11111111111¶111¶___¶¶¶111¶1¶¶¶________ _________¶¶¶¶¶¶111111111111¶__¶¶¶111¶¶¶1__________ ____________1¶¶¶¶¶11111111¶¶_¶¶¶¶111¶¶____________ ______________¶¶¶¶¶¶¶1111111_¶¶¶11¶¶1_____________ _________________1¶¶¶¶¶¶1111¶¶¶1¶¶¶¶______________ ____________________¶¶¶¶¶¶1¶¶¶¶¶1¶________________ _______________________¶1¶¶¶1¶¶¶__________________ ___________________________11¶____________________

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Date: 10/24/2016 6:32:00 PM
Stephen congratulations on your win in my contest with this sad and touching poem so beautifully written and I love the shape at the bottom too, so creative
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Date: 10/24/2016 9:33:00 AM
Congrats Stephen, for your placement with this touching piece.....
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Date: 10/24/2016 1:18:00 AM
Beutifully written, and then the ascii heart. Congratulations!
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Stephen Pennell
Date: 10/24/2016 4:26:00 AM
Got to look nice for broken wings , Thank you
Date: 10/23/2016 11:44:00 PM
oh...so sad....there is breach of trust and acute violence here....failing relations.... Congratulations Stephen// Anu:)
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Stephen Pennell
Date: 10/24/2016 4:29:00 AM
thank you , tried to make it as sad as possible stephen
Date: 10/23/2016 6:23:00 PM
very good and dramatic, Stephen, love the shape :"( congratulations on your win Hugs Eve
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Stephen Pennell
Date: 10/24/2016 4:30:00 AM
cheers eve , hope we did'nt make you to sad , broken wings comp rules :-)

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