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Life as a maypole, is an interesting theme where schemes we might plan can get tangled with dreams The things I had dreamed of, to better my life, would often get tangled, with wrong versus right Some streams of the ribbons, were shadowed with doubt The world was an ocean, where waves swept me out Like a sea washing up, at the base of a cliff I could feel all the breezes, and the winds of "what if"... Some places I longed for, were mere glimpses of light Some I still hope for, and pray for at night Some I could reach, and some I would fight Then, struggle to swim, against tides of requite Some ribbons cascade with the hopes I beget Some hanging limp with the mist of regret Yet...my life has been woven with green grass and flowers Where the sun kept me warm, to spend happy hours Life as a maypole, is an interesting theme My life as a maypole, is an unending game
_____________________________________________ 1/3/15 For Contest "Life is Like A Maypole" sponsored by Seren Roberts

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Date: 2/16/2015 5:50:00 PM
Carrie, CONGRATULATIONS, on your Win **SKAT**
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Date: 2/16/2015 3:40:00 PM
Ah YES, my #1 take the theme and run with it Carrie wonderful & I love the photo-sculpture you picked a 7 & a fav Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
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Date: 2/16/2015 11:57:00 AM
many congrats Carrie - a beautiful write - Hugs jan xxx
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Date: 2/16/2015 10:50:00 AM
Congratulations Carrie and thank you....Seren
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Date: 2/4/2015 6:13:00 AM
i love what you've done with this theme, carrie! some lovely imagery here. good louck in the contest...
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Date: 2/4/2015 3:00:00 AM
Wow that's an amazing creative masterpiece Carrie! Sure will do well in contest,, best wishes!
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Date: 2/3/2015 8:42:00 PM
You did a wonderful job here. I read it several times and it gently came alive for me. Your talent come through strong and straight from the heart. You paint a picture with words. Emile.
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