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Life after Death

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Life after Death

I hope there’s life after death
A soul that exists with our last breath -
Out of body steps

It would be a shame to just die
To become small dust motes in the light -
No eternal life

I don’t know what death will bring
But nothing more is terrifying -
I cling to faith’s wings


1/14/11
Susan Burch
For "Life and Death...And Beyond" Contest

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  1. Date: 1/19/2012 9:27:00 PM
    Congrats on your win, Susan! Love, Kim

  1. Date: 1/19/2012 8:54:00 AM
    Congratulations on the win of your poem in Linda-Marie's "Life And Death...And Beyond" contest Susan. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 1/18/2012 8:30:00 PM
    a unique take that truly glistens, susan.. sweet congrats with huggs! :)

  1. Date: 1/18/2012 4:41:00 PM
    CONGRATS SUSAN ON SWEET SUCCESS WITH THIS WONDERFUL ENTRY ...

  1. Date: 1/15/2012 3:48:00 AM
    Don't dwell on it Susan, accept life and live it. xx Liked the poem

  1. Date: 1/14/2012 2:41:00 PM
    You know there is nothing more terrifying to me than an afterlife ! I really want a good rest !

  1. Date: 1/14/2012 2:38:00 PM
    The only certain thing in life,is that someday our time here is over.Keeping the faith,brings us to the right place:) Liked your rhyme very much,Susan

  1. Date: 1/14/2012 1:57:00 PM
    Yes, it is terrifying to die! But I believe we will live after we die and there will be a place for us to go! If not what can we hope for, what could bring us peace in our fears of death?! Fabulous poem Susan! I thought it very enjoyable! Awesome Work!!