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Life will bring pleasure Searching good in every bad Soul stays in heaven. Life will bring peace Be positive in each hell Smile mirrors your soul. Life will bring unity augmenting relation in every odd personality connects heart. Life will bring strength consuming tear in every fear Hero, we all prefer. Life will bring success killing failure with best drudgery Goal smiles nice.

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Date: 3/15/2017 3:15:00 PM
Hello Manmath. Wow this is marvelous. I so enjoyed your second version regarding peace and soul. That truly spoke to me. You obviously can write in this format because each was executed wonderfully. Well done throughout.
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Date: 1/19/2017 11:57:00 PM
Nice take on life as a whole in this work. Peace & Blessings Matthew Anish
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Date: 12/27/2016 6:35:00 PM
Very nice thoughts, Manmath. Coming here also to wish you Happy New Year!
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Date: 12/16/2016 4:38:00 AM
- A beautiful haiku, Manmath - Best wishes for a peaceful Christmas for you and your family - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 11/27/2016 1:37:00 PM
Your soul smiles with every poem you write Manmath as you share your gifts with us. Blessings, Connie : )
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Manmath Dalei
Date: 11/28/2016 11:19:00 AM
Thanks a lot for ur friendly visit.
Date: 11/14/2016 6:24:00 PM
Wonderful poem that is full of intelligence and knowledge. A moving piece too! -JWE
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Date: 10/31/2016 9:17:00 PM
Beautiful and wise!
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Date: 10/31/2016 5:44:00 AM
Life can be such a wonderful thing if you let it be. Nicely done.
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Date: 10/29/2016 9:39:00 AM
It's obvious you love life Manmath.
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Date: 10/25/2016 3:57:00 PM
very nice, Manmath. How are you doing these days?
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Manmath Dalei
Date: 10/30/2016 8:27:00 AM
I am fine Andrea. Thanks for ur nice comment.
Date: 10/21/2016 9:16:00 AM
Very nice! Profound....
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Date: 10/21/2016 6:46:00 AM
Great one
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Date: 10/21/2016 6:43:00 AM
A nice poem of optimism ...
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Date: 10/21/2016 2:49:00 AM
A string of poetry pearls dear, Manmath! A seven
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