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In pain! Love oh so vague, undefined, difficult to understand; do I love her? or is she just a friend- this life is so confusing, a confusing mess, from the first cry of our hearts and the beat of our lungs to the dying breath of the lonely, we are confused.

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Date: 11/26/2014 10:01:00 AM
True. Very true. But when you find love... you'll know it.
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Date: 11/24/2014 4:17:00 PM
Bravo, I agree life (as emotional sentient beings) is quite confusing.. Love (to me) has to be the opposite of confusion. It is confidence, sureness, and understanding.. I think your poem just helped me figure that out.. Thank you and keep sharing. ~Joel
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Date: 11/24/2014 2:02:00 PM
Love will manifest itself if we give it enough time....most humans cannot wait and think passion or lust is love. Love is worth waiting for. Good write.
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Date: 11/24/2014 1:29:00 PM
Hi, Joseph, Give it time and you will have your answer. Blessings, Darlene
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