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Life

The colors drift With the winds of winter Drafts dapple and draw A sequence of life Ever changing But always the same Once it begins It never ends And so life goes…

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 11/7/2014 9:07:00 PM
I like the imagery this poem invokes. Change seems to be a significant aspect of life. Lovely poem here drifting in and out of melancholy colors. Always, Laura
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Date: 11/2/2014 8:12:00 PM
My dear, so good to read this kind of poem from you. Yes, and so it goes. Life can suck, but you have given me hope that you feel a bit better. BG wonderful poem, BTW
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Stephen Kilmer
Date: 11/2/2014 10:17:00 PM
Thanks Barbara. I know it's hard to imagine me being upbeat! :) ~Kilmer
Date: 11/2/2014 6:55:00 PM
A very lovely poem connecting our life with the changing seasons. Beautiful Stephen!
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Stephen Kilmer
Date: 11/2/2014 10:16:00 PM
Thanks Connie. I am glad you enjoyed it! ~Kilmer

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