Life

some may know the hurt I've delt with. I've overcame but did not and won't forgett. I cry and cry, laugh and laugh... My life is different. My pain is raw, my body is restless. I'm taking life free handed. just wanted to let myself get the feel of writting again, hope everyone is well.

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Messoh Vincent

Date: 6/10/2016 1:43:00 AM

Pain is always a tricky and dangerous monster in our hearts but thank God;art heals it completely and turns into an opportunity...... #7

Messoh Vincent

Date: 6/10/2016 1:41:00 AM

Congrats my dear.I believe your use of the word AGAIN means you were writing before: Welcome back into this very healthy world of literature and personally I look forward to even greater time sharing with and learning from you.

Len Gasun

Date: 5/12/2016 1:20:00 PM

Pain is a great spice of life to test how strong we are my dearest Royal. A very beautiful moving poem sweetie. I enjoyed so much the read. Thanks a lot for sharing my dear. May I also have this opportunity to thank you (belatedly) for appreciating my poem in your contest. Sending many hugs to you, your lovely kids, your mom and everybody!love you all, Galeo

Eric Boddie

Date: 2/23/2016 1:47:00 PM

I don't know your hurt but I can feel your pain....my Life, well you could say it's the same....because when all you want to do is Love....satan will influence the haters to shove....but I won't be moved at any moment in time....and because of that I hope that you will want to be a friend of mine....very powerful and inspiring rt....;)

Jan Allison

Date: 2/6/2016 3:22:00 PM

Life sure isn't easy Royal - welcome back to the site look forward to reading more of your poems ... you sure have inherited the writing gene :-) :-) hugs jan xx

Suzanne Delaney

Date: 2/6/2016 1:10:00 AM

I love that last line, Royal: Looking forward to more of your poems, little princess of poetry, SuZ

John Loving Iii

Date: 4/1/2014 3:44:00 PM

I don't take writing writing takes me; if you can understand that.

Paul Martinez

Date: 2/25/2014 11:33:00 AM

Nice poem,so much said with a few words..,.hope youre doing ok

Chris Boskovski

Date: 2/18/2014 10:55:00 PM

Oh Royal I can't believe it took me this long to discover such a poetess as you! A deep write, and you express yourself so well! I noticed this work is a bit old, but it is so fresh in detail and in such a short amount of words. A powerful write and I feel your upmost pain! I can relate to you so much. A powerful and deep write, that enjoyed very, very much. Thank you my dear and loving Royal. :) xoxoxo

Jared Pickett

Date: 2/18/2014 10:54:00 AM

I have said this before!! A heart that has experienced pain and recovered is less fragile. If not for the adversity in life we wouldn't grow and learn! You are still young and in time your wounds will heal.. Keep your head up princess and keep that pen moving!! Get it out, that is what WE are here for!!Asavvy1

David Williams

Date: 2/18/2014 8:46:00 AM

Hello Royal I thought I would take time to visit your work after my comment on the blog, you have to excuse me but you sound like you have been through lots of heartache but my memory is rubbish so I am not sure what it was, but whatever it was I hope that with time and love form your family it eases, though it may never be forgotten....would be good to read a new piece form you, let me know when you have ....David

S.Zaynab Kamoonpuri

Date: 2/18/2014 7:46:00 AM

Yeah life sweet n sour. Yor poem is so very nice! Thumbs up. Are u PD'S daughtr realy? Take care. Do review mine latest too.

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 12/14/2013 3:18:00 PM

So true and all we can do is go on! Light & Love

Chuck Melugin

Date: 11/24/2013 10:05:00 AM

Good Job Royal!

Johnny Rhinem

Date: 11/22/2013 9:30:00 PM

† Hey Beautiful Baby Girl! You Are Such An Inspiration; Beyound ˜ Welcome Back, And, Happy Holidays ˜ My Love, Always, John

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 11/22/2013 5:30:00 PM

Hola, my sweet daughter The Taurus. I like the way you embrace light inside. Life is not easy, and I am proud of you... Hugs... mom...aka..PD

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 11/22/2013 4:46:00 PM

- A moving and good poem Royal! - Have a great weekend. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)