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Life

I was the sunshine that cradled your day that tried to push the clouds away I was the sand that ran between your toes when you were four years old that soon became the rain you danced in from seven to eleven And I watched you grow in the glow of a moon that beamed when you turned thirteen How unfair you thought I'd become when you turned twenty-one because you lost a few dreams But I stayed awake when you were out late I was the stars 'till you turned twenty-eight And when you found your love "the one" I was glimmer in the eye, the blue sky, the sun Then you turned thirty-one I became cloud, thunder and shower there weren't enough minutes to put in your hour You forgot how to dance in the rain 'till you turned forty all you did was complain Then you took off your shoes and went back to the sand I was now the warmth of your child's hand At forty-three you spent more time with me You began to understand And when you stood fifty years old you stayed warm to me even though at times I was cold How close we grew when you turned sixty-two The breeze was I that hung your grandchild's kite in the sky And I'm sorry I made you sad when I took "the one" away But I was proud when you pushed aside that cloud and cradled 'me' in the sun for the remainder of our day

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 8/3/2011 10:25:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry making it through round one in the PoetrySoup International Poetry contest Gerry. I wish you the best in the final round. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/9/2009 3:13:00 AM
Gerry, congratulations on making the first round of the contest...Raul
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Date: 9/26/2009 11:35:00 AM
PS--Congratulations on making it through the first round in the contest. Good luck in the finals! Karen
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Date: 9/25/2009 4:20:00 PM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week >> James
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Date: 9/24/2009 2:11:00 PM
Interesting reflection. Congratulations on having your poem featured this week. Enjoy your honor. Keep on writing. Karen
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Date: 9/24/2009 12:48:00 PM
Gerry, congrats on being featured this week...Raul
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Date: 9/24/2009 12:08:00 PM
Congratulations on your poem making it through the first round.Wishing you the best in the finals. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/24/2009 9:25:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved poetry being featured this week Gerry. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/24/2009 7:59:00 AM
Very touching, dear Gerry. Congratulations on your well deserved feature of the week. Love and Light, Lainie.
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Date: 3/11/2009 2:46:00 PM
Congratulations on your excellent poetry being featured this week Gerry. Love, Carol
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Date: 3/11/2009 9:55:00 AM
Congrats Gerry on the featuring of "Life." Vince
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Date: 3/9/2009 6:01:00 PM
Interesting view in this poem. Congratulations on having it featured. Thank you for sharing this story with us. Best wishes with your writing. Karen
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Date: 3/9/2009 4:28:00 PM
Very thought-provoking write here, Gerry. Almost a "Personification" form if the voice speaking is the wind ... very moving and great imagery and an excellent choice to be a favorite of the week here at the Soup. Congratulations!
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Date: 3/9/2009 11:10:00 AM
Gerry - Congratulations on your poem being featured this week! Very well deserved. Peace always, John
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Date: 3/9/2009 6:25:00 AM
Congratulations on your wonderful poetry being featured this week! Love, Shar
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Date: 3/8/2009 9:44:00 PM
Gerry - Congratulations on having your poetry featured this week – God Bless, MJ
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Date: 2/18/2009 8:54:00 PM
I loved this write Gerry. liked the way it flowed. Very good write.
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Date: 1/5/2009 5:33:00 PM
Gerry this is so wonderful to read. Thank you. Laurie
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