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'lies In Disguise'

Blood sealed into my flesh Never be totally rid of the pain I was told lies in the dark of my mind Lies,lies,lies in Disguise Why could'nt they just tell me the truth? I would have took it someway Instead they made me a mockery A sinful spirit they say bribery played a hand Lies,lies,lies in Disguise I can't take no more Critizing me for something That wasen't my fault They knew from the start It was magic from the heart Lies,lies,lies in Disguise They even changed my name Confusion set in Lies,lies,lies in Disguise.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011


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Carol Sunshine Brown
Date: 5/31/2011 5:25:00 AM
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A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be Patricia. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Read and comment on their's and they will return in kind. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love and blessing always, Carol
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Constance La France
Date: 5/28/2011 7:58:00 AM
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Amazing poem, I can relate to everything you wrote and welcome to poetrysoup~~
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Patricia Smithy
Date: 5/27/2011 2:58:00 PM
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Thank you for all of your comments,
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Linda-Marie Sweetheart
Date: 5/27/2011 2:29:00 PM
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Welcome to Poetry Soup.. enjoyed reading your creative poetry ... enjoy PS as u continue to share with luv to entertain us all ...
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Laura Breidenthal
Date: 5/27/2011 1:29:00 PM
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Great job! Enjoyed reading your poem. Keep it up! ~Laura
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Kash Poet
Date: 5/27/2011 12:49:00 PM
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A deep write from you Patricia.The form of the poem is free verse I think....
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Dr.Ram Mehta
Date: 5/27/2011 12:48:00 PM
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it's nice lyrical and with rhythms with the refrain lies lies lies in disguise, Patricia
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