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How time sheds your claws of deceit From falsehood grating my vulnerability; Yet I claim a self’s need to be: the rain freshens New waves...bathing, exalting my authentic life That dances through all veins within the marrow, While I see my face emerge as a pink orchid Allowing this heart to love my own essence: Till the moon shines in these eyes… alive, liberated. Laura Lou’s Quote Prompt II 11.26.2016

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Date: 12/22/2016 11:54:00 AM
Congratulations on a beautiful emotional poem and HAPPY HOLIDAYS, nette!
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Date: 12/19/2016 11:43:00 AM
Excellent Nette, congratulations...
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Date: 12/18/2016 3:08:00 AM
Pink orchid, great. Congratulations on your win. Kai
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Date: 12/17/2016 11:31:00 PM
Astounding!!! I simply love it. Congrats, Nette.
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Date: 12/17/2016 3:14:00 PM
One of my favourites! Hugs Rick. Congratulations.
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Date: 12/17/2016 1:53:00 PM
Great write with lovely images. Congratulations.
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Date: 12/17/2016 1:39:00 PM
Wonderful, Nette. Awesome, everyone already said it, so I just say: Congratulations :)
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Date: 12/17/2016 12:31:00 PM
woW!!!! This one is a winner for me, heart loving its essence, self love!!! absolute freedom like a bird! Congrats on your top win dear Nette, love, Anu:)
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Date: 12/17/2016 11:55:00 AM
Dances through the veins of your marrow- love that line, thank you and congrats :)-luloo
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Date: 11/26/2016 11:53:00 AM
Hi Nette, You got another "WoW" coming. Outstanding write. A without seven doubt: -) Alexis
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Date: 11/25/2016 9:23:00 PM
Wow simply wow!
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Date: 11/25/2016 6:10:00 PM
I respect people who know when to give and when to hold back!Your true value shines through this honorable poem!
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Date: 11/25/2016 5:56:00 PM
This eloquent poem on self-esteem allows me to to stand on a strong footing in the rock face of a drained relationship's unsteady climb! Bravo!
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Date: 11/25/2016 2:19:00 PM
Such a beautiful poem nette...love the pink orchid line
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Date: 11/25/2016 2:16:00 PM
Absolutely beautiful Nette, this one had me smiling as I read it. Good luck in the contest.
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