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Liberate Me

I SAY LIBERATE ME! free me from a bondage known all too well free me from those chain-links felt way too much free me from a world that's so out of touch,even though it manages to stay in touch free me from those dungeons and allow me to roam roam like this signal on my phone that's holding me in captivity with fees I SAY LIBERATE ME! liberate me from the wonderful big brother who looks over each and every one of us the same big brother that captures us rebelling against the stoplight and before we can get down the street and around the corner our tag is photographed, placing us in line to receive notice that a fine has to be paid,cash,credit, or debit; however they can get it PLEASE BRING ON THE LIBERATION! liberation from the debt that's been kept on the books every since I completed that credit application, at the time not knowing that I was applying high-interest rates to my budget, which is no longer a budget but a conduit for companies having fun extracting funds from a paycheck that's already heartbreaking to look at Liberate me from the from the fines,fees,interest-rates,stoplights,nightlights, the debt acquired through a misunderstanding of APR policies, from the policies themselves imposed by the powers that be I say,liberate me

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Date: 4/5/2016 10:22:00 PM
Lawrence Brannen, nice to see this powerful poem again. linda
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Date: 8/21/2015 9:57:00 AM
enjoying this poem once again
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Date: 7/7/2014 7:50:00 PM
Lawrence,, Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight, in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile, others passed, when I first join the soup 4 years ago. I wish you the best when it comes to your compositions. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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Date: 7/5/2014 6:26:00 PM
Welcome to Poetry Soup, Lawrence. I am glad you discovered this nice community of writers and hope you enjoy the site. Read the work of other poet's and comment if you find something you like; many poets will return the favor. Over time you will get to "know" some of us. You are welcome to visit my page anytime. Enjoy!
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Date: 7/2/2014 2:05:00 AM
Hi Lawrence, congratulations on a great write - I really enjoyed reading this poem! Well done!
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Date: 7/1/2014 11:15:00 AM
Thank you for sharing :)
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Date: 7/1/2014 7:04:00 AM
deep write..WARM WELCOME TO POETRYSOUP!!! I have been here bout two years now and I really am having fun and lots of learning here more than poetry itself but life.. :D i hope you will enjoy it here as I do.. :) God bless you >> :)olive eloisa
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Date: 7/1/2014 4:20:00 AM
- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup, Lawrence :) - I choose your first great written free verse - Nice to meet you :) - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- PoetrySoup Rule1: Be kind and keep PoetrySoup a haven. PoetrySoup is a drama free zone(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 6/30/2014 10:18:00 PM
Lawrence,, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you enjoy the community, as I did when I first join, March 2010. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over, to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST, in hopes it inspires you to write another poem. I'm looking forward to following you and your poetry ha-ha a special pair:) here's the link to the contest page. http://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry_contests/ <---~Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 6/30/2014 4:59:00 PM
Yep wish I could, them things are hard to avoid! Hey just a side note, since I have been having similar problems, you might be able to go into "My Poems" and edit and fix the spacing on your poem, seems to be a glitch lately. Enjoyed reading it. :)
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