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Letting It Be

Father taught us to work hard and be counted He was strict with us and with himself as well We may have been delinquent yet patience he mounted We were bit scared but it made discipline in us dwell As we grew up, he chiseled our rough angles well. Old, he still works hard and goes about his daily chores One by one we all settled well and wanted to take our turn He wishes to be independent, our request to help he ignores Alas, it was not to be, as he did not accept the favor return We had to respect his solitude and intent to do his own yearn. Quintain (English) 2 stanzas Contest: Hard Choices by Dr. Ram Mehta Date write: 17.6.2014 Note: In Indian cultural context, it is generally hard for a settled and grown up son not to be able to do his bit for a father when the situation arises, even in modern times.

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Date: 7/23/2014 3:44:00 PM
Mohan :) Thank you for the sweet reply, on my comment. I'm a little late, getting back to all the replies, left a while back. XOX ~LINDA~
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Date: 7/4/2014 2:30:00 PM
Congrats on a fine win, Mohan. Liked your write (and the footnote). People who have worked hard all their life prefer to carry on doing it their way, even in old age, as long as health permits. // paul
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Mohan Chutani
Date: 7/4/2014 8:13:00 PM
Thanks Paul. In such a situation the son has a hard choice of letting it be. Mohan
Date: 7/4/2014 2:30:00 PM
congratulations on your win in Dr Mehta's contest i really enjoyed reading the poem and appreciated the explanation at the end. Hugs Jan xxx
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Date: 7/4/2014 8:14:00 PM
Thanks Jan, for your appreciation. Mohan
Date: 7/4/2014 10:01:00 AM
Sweetly penned Mohan ! Worthy merited win,, congrats!
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Mohan Chutani
Date: 7/4/2014 10:15:00 AM
Thanks Upma, for the nice complements. Mohan
Date: 7/4/2014 9:59:00 AM
Mohan, Congratulations, life's all about the hard choices we face on a daily base. Have a happy 4th of July... LUV LINDA
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Mohan Chutani
Date: 7/4/2014 10:19:00 AM
Thanks.
Date: 7/4/2014 8:30:00 AM
A unique write on the Hard Choices and fine Rhyming, Congrats on the win in my contest, Mohan
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Date: 7/4/2014 10:18:00 AM
It is a big big encouragement to be placed in your contest Dr. Ram. Thank you for being a father figure. Mohan

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