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Letting Go

The house is very quiet now, as I move about Without her hugs and giggles, the fire has gone out She was so excited, so I pasted on a smile Inside my heart was breaking, for me a painful trial Wasn't it just yesterday, she was my little girl It seems like but a moment, I've watched her life unfurl Now she is off to college, standing on her own Challenging her new world, while I stay here alone I know that soon she'll come back, but it won't be the same She has become a woman now, and we'll just share a name So I'll wrap myself in memories and wait for the time when I hear her say "hi daddy", and my heart lights up again

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 1/6/2012 8:58:00 AM
Congrats on your win in the contest. Thanks, bl
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Bob Quigley
Date: 1/6/2012 1:49:00 PM
Thanks bl
Date: 1/6/2012 7:06:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Brian Strand's "Any 2011 Poem" contest Bob. Love, Carol
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Bob Quigley
Date: 1/6/2012 1:49:00 PM
Thank you Carol

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