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Letters From the Ocean

For as the sun drowns in the misty waves I coat my dreams with the filthy shade And gently some drops of ocean tickled Whispering my thoughts in a stormy tune I coat my dreams with the filthy shade Jiggling my soul with a wetted hope Whispering my thoughts in a stormy tune Drifted through my veins as I went on asleep Jiggling my soul with a wetted hope To believe in a rise of a holy sun Drifted through my veins as I went on asleep That abides to arise with daily new notes To believe in a rise of a holy sun And gently some drops of ocean tickled That abides to arise with daily new notes For as the sun drowns in the misty waves

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Date: 7/12/2011 11:40:00 AM
This is such a lovely poem filled with creative imagery, Samar. Congratulations on your win in PD's contest! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 7/12/2011 5:19:00 AM
Congrats Samar on your wonderful win with this dazzling assignment ..luv..
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Date: 7/12/2011 5:14:00 AM
Congratulations Samar on your win in the "Assignment" contest of P.D. Love, Carol
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Date: 7/12/2011 4:18:00 AM
My congratulations on this win in the contest of p.d., Samar
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Date: 7/12/2011 12:41:00 AM
Samar,,Congratulations on a poem well done! Thank you for supporting my contest~ I sure enjoyed every entry,..p.d.
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Date: 6/17/2011 8:50:00 PM
I sure enjoy pantoum poetry, Samar.This was very nice to read.
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Date: 6/17/2011 5:50:00 PM
Very deep and meaningful expressions, samar,
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