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Let My Glass Speak

Silence.. let my glass speak, bubbles rising,bursting, snapshots of faces in my mind, colours overlapping with each other, first sip,first sin,mom and dad's face try to peep in my heart, then vanish like bubbles. =========================

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Date: 9/9/2011 3:51:00 AM
fanatastic magery, kashi.. winning;s best!.. go!.. now, come and visit!..:) huggs, nette
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Date: 9/8/2011 11:06:00 PM
super intense lines Kash.. dramatic expressions especially first sip, sirst sin, mom and dad's face.. so cool .. good luck in the contest.. impressive my friend...
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Date: 9/8/2011 10:10:00 PM
that is a very poetic line, "let my glass speak." A good reflective poem. She asks specifically for free verse, Kash. I hope this is acceptable. I had done MINE as a dodoitsu and then went back and read underneath her picture where it says "free verse" Disappointedly, I took mine out of form and changed it into somewhat of a free verse. Good luck in the contest.Luv, Andrea
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Date: 9/8/2011 6:00:00 PM
Creative work that has winner written all over it..Enjoyed..Good luck in the contest..Thanks for your presence at my work..Sara
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