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and the story goes like this . . .
I walk up the dusty, dark staircase that had been my favorite place, playing with my dolls, make believe, dreaming of meeting a prince; Wanting to grow up, but that was many years ago, many heartbreaks ago, my reason today, Grandma has left this world and all in the attic is mine. The door has not been opened in years, it creaks and groans as I push, I stand in the doorway, finding the courage to enter the dampness; The sun filters in through a small window, dust drifts, cobwebs lace the corners, the atmosphere silent, like death, echoing of the past as I look about. No one else wants any of this, they call it junk, only I know the treasures, passing by an old lamp, a stroller, a rocking chair, a chest of drawers, a bed; Portraits of ancestors long forgotten, dusty old things, treasures from the past, a peacefulness comes over me but I am searching for something special. And there it is pushed into a corner, an antique chest, long forgotten, it holds the vintage clothing, jewelry, and writings of the child that was me; Things I had treasured playing dress up, pretending, making up stories, kneeling, my hand touches the ornate surface brushing away dust. Slowly, I open the lid, peeking inside, everything is there as I had left it,, my eyes fill with tears, memories swirling in my head of that little girl; Dressed up in Grandma's old clothes, writing stories on the attic room floor, stories that will become poems for I have found my lost treasure chest. ___________________________ July 21, 2013 Poetry/Narrative/Let me tell you a story Copyright Protected, ID 07-494-069-21 All Rights Reserved, 2013, Constance La France Submitted to Premier contest, Your Best Poem, sponsor, Shadow Hamilton, Judged 07/2013 Second Place ______________________________ Submitted to the Standard contest, Any Old Poem #4, sponsor, Skat, Third Place __________________________________ Submitted to the Standard contest, Treasure Chest, Anthony Slausen, Fourth Place

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Date: 7/27/2015 10:09:00 PM
Broken, congrats on your best poem. Love LINDA
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Date: 7/24/2015 4:39:00 PM
Congratulations on your win still a beautiful story. Hugs Eve
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Date: 7/24/2015 4:35:00 PM
Broken, Congratulations on your awesome win. **SKAT**
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Date: 7/24/2015 1:18:00 PM
a treasure of a poem Broken wings the imagery is so s vivid - congrats on your win :) hugs jan xx 7 xx
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Date: 7/24/2015 11:17:00 AM
you take your reader through the years as you spin your story Connie delightful pen congrats on placing hugs
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Date: 5/29/2015 4:19:00 PM
B.W. your poems are always so beautiful. Congratulations on your win with a 7+. Hugs :~)
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Date: 5/28/2015 7:07:00 PM
So beautiful, Broken. Your poem touched my heart with the imagery you present of a sweet but sad real life experience that stirred so many memories for you. Congratulations on your nice win. Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 5/28/2015 6:14:00 PM
Ah yes, those melancholy memories that filter forever through our minds and pens. Congrats on the high placement.
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Date: 5/28/2015 3:49:00 PM
Your many poems are your treasures that you also got from these childhood experiences, Constance. A wonderful win for a wonderful poem.
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Date: 5/28/2015 3:01:00 PM
broken, Congratulations, that is all :-) **SKAT WAS HERE**
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Date: 9/27/2013 8:04:00 PM
Broken... CONGRATULATIONS... in ANTHONY'S "Treasure Chest" contest.. enjoying your awesome win. ***LINDA***
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Date: 9/24/2013 3:54:00 AM
stunning narrative and emotions Constance congrats on win Shadow x smile
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Date: 9/24/2013 3:34:00 AM
Congratulations on this deserved win - memories are treasures so precious and rare to be valued and kept dear to the ine that beholds. Great read.
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Date: 9/23/2013 10:26:00 PM
congrats. love ~SKAT~
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Date: 9/23/2013 8:48:00 AM
I love this poem...your images are so vivid I felt as though I was there waiting with anticipation for you to open that chest...beautifully penned poem...congrats on your win :)
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Date: 7/27/2013 3:36:00 PM
lovely nostalgic write
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Date: 7/21/2013 8:33:00 PM
This is a very sentimental write about your glorious past, and a special treasure chest! I like how you portrayed just an ordinary antique chest and made it extraordinary! For in your eyes this chest was super special to you, and you showed this perfectly within your poem! I really enjoyed reading this delightful piece this evening! What a pleasantly harmonious poem, Great Work!!
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Date: 7/21/2013 3:18:00 PM
Now that's a treasure chest filled with love... Very nice.
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