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Let It Rain, It Is I

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Let It Rain, It Is I

Be it, Be it
             It BURNS, God help me
use control, control it
             But I am, thats when I've gone wrong
Read, understand it
             You are the best with whats given
Help me, Help me
             The best with whats given? Whos taken?
                                                                                Not Me
To be it, use it, control it, and understand it
                          Show me

                                                           Show me
But what a disappointment when it can't be done...

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