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Lesson Learned

Caught in the act his will cracked when he jacked the bus. Making a fuss with a cuss he blamed us and lied. With loss of pride tears he cried, still they fried his hide. 02/16/16

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 3/16/2016 7:48:00 AM

Than-Bauk written in style..Congrats on your winner..Sara

James Inman
Date: 3/16/2016 9:10:00 AM

Thanks Sara.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/15/2016 5:52:00 PM

James, Congrats on your win in "Marugu MO's contest." Wuv ~LINDA~

James Inman
Date: 3/16/2016 9:11:00 AM

Thank you so much PD.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/13/2016 7:19:00 PM

Yours was truly perfect. Should have gotten a number placement! Congrats on the winner list.

James Inman
Date: 3/14/2016 8:37:00 AM

Thanks Andrea.

Vladislav Raven

Date: 3/11/2016 8:35:00 AM

Hi James, Congratulations on your placement in the contest....Vlad.

James Inman
Date: 3/11/2016 10:47:00 AM

Thanks Vladislav.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/4/2016 7:13:00 PM

Hi, Ralph. Came back to your than bauk since you saw mine. I am anxious to see how it gets judged. About my catfished poem, I don't mind so much a bald head, m own husband is bald now, but I had to use a word that rhymed , so I was stuck using bald head for something bad about the catfish guy. I hope i did not offend too many guys on soup. hahaha. I wanted to say a lot more than that, but the form simply does not allow it.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/23/2016 5:39:00 PM

just read what you said to me down here. Don't feel bad. Nobody in this form can say it's their best work!

James Inman
Date: 2/23/2016 8:22:00 PM

Thanks Andrea.

Janice Canerdy

Date: 2/23/2016 11:38:00 AM

Clever write, James! Janice

James Inman
Date: 2/23/2016 12:37:00 PM

Hi Janice, thanks.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 2/22/2016 4:40:00 AM

- A great poem, James - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

James Inman
Date: 2/22/2016 5:29:00 AM

Thank you Anne-Lise. Hope you had a nice weekend.

Caycay Jennings

Date: 2/20/2016 8:43:00 AM

Very good - thank you for my chuckle and the remaining grin ... CayCay

James Inman
Date: 2/20/2016 9:51:00 AM

Always Caycay, thanks for the comment.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/19/2016 5:54:00 PM

you did well with this one. I am finding it so difficult. I HATE not being able to use more than a few syllables per line just to get in the weird rhymes. One of my least favorite forms at Soup but you did it proud.

James Inman
Date: 2/19/2016 8:57:00 PM

Thanks Andrea, not my best poem I'm afraid.