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It's the unfair society: from lenient judges to corrupt attorneys and with some bad cops who claim that their motto is: " To serve and protect " Oh, no don't tell me that I am crazy: I don't trust the Law! It's an insult to society or to the ones who wrote it! Oh, don't tell me that murderous thoughts don't double-cross me to want to toss those offenders into the slammer where they really belong! I should be on that bench and give sentences without showing sympathy or forgiveness! One guy who had a bag of weed was released the next day... because it was his first offense! It's foolishness...there were two minors in that car: wasn't it the fault of a lenient judge? Hookers, so-called Ladies of the Night are more protected than the ordinary citizens, some wacko sees them as worthless beings and kills them dumping them in marshes... I am saddened by such murders, but they don't lead a clean life! Oh, don't tell that God doesn't have murderous thoughts like me! But when some of one of them tap on your window, as you wait for the red light to turn green, solicits sex for money...wouldn't anybody have a murderous thought and give them a nasty look? Oh, don't tell me that sex doesn't sell everywhere! It's so disgusting to see ads with semi-nude models advertizing for the big companies: it's the buck, not the morality! And worse than that some guys watch **** as they drive! O society so filthy and shameless, you have become so immoral, putting away the Commandments that Moses God carved with fire! It's wrong to hate a brother or sister, and seek revenge with either curses or bad deeds... slandering is not humane and compassionate; if he or she did something wrong...show love, don't have murderous thoughts! The hatred makes the gun go off quickly and the knife cut very deep! So goes for your neighbors, love them as you would love your own and by spreading kindness: darkness will be replaced by light, and hate, ignorance and avarice by love! Written by Andrew Crisci for Susan Burch's contest, " Getting Away With Murder/Murderous Thoughts "

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Date: 10/15/2011 3:43:00 AM
hookers get records, johns usually don't, the money goes to the pimps first, then the car dealers and jewelry stores, then the banks and the miners, suffering isn't exclusive, but is heavily laid on the ones who can't afford to make campaign contributions. And then I think about the kinda people Jesus hung with, and I'm ok with all that. Thanks for the write~N
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