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Leeroy von Nebulae

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Leeroy von Nebulae

Leeroy von Nebulae and Pitter Patter Supernova

Upon the sparkling April field, where the bell-flowers blossomed,
two poets stood amid the blooms, two writers of their wisdom,
where singing aves exalted them, cause deep in verse have fathomed
and treated poetry like none, with loyalty and serfdom.

Meantime the birds were chirping in the leafage of the forest
the two composers synthesiz'd the crop of thoughts that random
became their poetry's free verse, philosophy, thus, modest,
the scriptures called bankrupted talk and artlessness of flotsam.

The authors, thus, amid the trees, and vervains' purple colors,
narrated 'bout the pepper steaks and pizzas pepperoni,
the grayish donkeys and their bray, through softened words of candor,
conducting hence this spectacle and joyous ceremony.

What was occurring round the two was godly sent, on purpose;
the softened breeze, the sunny morn, the singing of the birdies,
and furthermore their kindest verse that both believed was flawless,
- the soul's redemption stands upon the praising by the toadies.

Obtusely raising, slow but firm, their tilted thoughts euphoric
have driven both to fly above this natural assemblage,
hence joyfully enjoined the cause of logic anti-strophic,
amid the clouds envisioning a pizza-Heaven-cottage.

Leeroy von Nebulae and Pitter Patter Supernova
expressed their malarky of verse, that donkeys then recited
and stood impassive 'mid the blooms, their thoughts a dull cadenza,
evaluated by the birds, that chirped their notes, astounded.

© 03-23-2014, All Rights Reserved
(Iambic decapentasyllabic verse)


Sponsor: rob carmack
Contest Name: Screwed II
Deadline: 5/9/2015

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  1. Date: 4/18/2015 5:56:00 PM
    Hello Giorgio, Passing by reading a few of the contest win for the contest "Screwed II." After viewing the picture, you attached, I see some poets never change. Yes, you were robbed. Probably on purpose. Congratulations, on finally getting the win you deserved. Always LINDA

  1. Date: 4/18/2015 6:05:00 AM
    Absolutely stunning poem I love it! Congratulations!

    A. V. Avatar Giorgio A. V.
    Date: 4/18/2015 9:09:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you very much!
  1. Date: 4/15/2015 11:09:00 AM
    Giorgio, beautifully penned poem, so happy for you on your wonderful first place win in the contest

    A. V. Avatar Giorgio A. V.
    Date: 4/18/2015 2:59:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you for your kind words and thoughts, B.K. !
  1. Date: 4/15/2015 7:53:00 AM
    Congratulations, Giorgio, for your well-deserved top of the podium win for this beautiful and so well-crafted poem! Sandra

    A. V. Avatar Giorgio A. V.
    Date: 4/18/2015 2:59:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you very much, Sandra !
  1. Date: 4/15/2015 5:20:00 AM
    Glad to see this showcased Giorgio:-) hugs Jan x

    A. V. Avatar Giorgio A. V.
    Date: 4/18/2015 3:00:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you, Jan.
  1. Date: 4/9/2015 4:41:00 PM
    Come to think of poetry, I feel grateful for two reasons: 1) God has blessed me in order to compose verses like the one above, and 2) He has also blessed me in order to critique and evaluate poetry analogously.

  1. Date: 2/27/2015 10:35:00 PM
    Great Entry, thank you for sharing. SKAT

    A. V. Avatar Giorgio A. V.
    Date: 2/28/2015 5:38:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    It is a great entry, indeed! A very good poem, according to my opinion. Thank you, S.A.
  1. Date: 2/24/2015 1:42:00 AM
    Unfolding mysteries of your great pen with this masterpiece Giorgio,, Congrats on big win! Wht does the title say?

    A. V. Avatar Giorgio A. V.
    Date: 2/24/2015 12:28:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you, Dr Upma. The title consists of two funny and fictitious names: Leroy Von Nebulae and Pitter Patter Supernova. The word "y", between them, means "and" in Spanish.
  1. Date: 3/24/2014 4:41:00 PM
    great depth of layers Giorgio lovely pen hugs ty for birthday wishes

    A. V. Avatar Giorgio A. V.
    Date: 3/24/2014 6:08:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Shadow! :)
  1. Date: 3/23/2014 12:13:00 PM
    A very well crafted as well as creative write my friend..I enjoyed reading this one..Thank you for your visit to my page. Ken

    A. V. Avatar Giorgio A. V.
    Date: 3/23/2014 3:45:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Ken.
  1. Date: 3/23/2014 7:41:00 AM
    Awesome

    A. V. Avatar Giorgio A. V.
    Date: 3/23/2014 3:45:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you.