Leaving You Each Breath Stunned

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Casting out shadows the softest kiss lovingly Whispers warmly inside echoes Gentleness touching deeply brushes upon your soul clouds swiftly disappear Heartbeats sing to one true tune In a thousand dreams enchanting Sweet nightingale sparks star-blazing wishes alights Each a sparkle circling around diamonds forever Held always inside two gems Fluttering wings

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Iris E. S-Lewis

Date: 2/13/2016 5:49:00 PM

Utterly romantic.

Sandra Adams

Date: 2/1/2016 6:19:00 PM

i think what i remember most about your poetry was the beauty you always shared within your words...this one was as i remember...great write...hugs

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 1/30/2016 4:53:00 PM

- Love this dear friend Liam - So touching beautiful - Best wishes for a lovely weekend for you and your loved ones - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

White Sage

Date: 1/30/2016 2:49:00 AM

the flow was good Liam, excellent write

Lewis Nyaga

Date: 1/29/2016 7:05:00 PM

Liam..a most enchanting poem.. excellently delivered

Dorian Petersen Potter

Date: 1/29/2016 6:01:00 PM

Hi Liam!:))Wow!!Wow!Wow!This is the most very beautiful,romantic,tender,sweet,passionate n' captivating love poem,you've written here my dearest friend Liam.Just dazzling!All so very beautifully written.Just awesome!Another very beautiful, sparkling diamond from your very golden glowing pen.I love it!A most very beautiful, heartfelt,romantic,dreamy,heart melting away enchanting love poem to be held very close to my heart.smiling.This is so very beautiful n' sweet!Just amazing!So wonderful!I truly enjoy it!A true glowing golden gem!Just beautiful!Outstanding poem.Your pen is truly mighty golden!A 7 + + + + +!A Fav!To me you're always the best in everything Liam.So very beautiful,romantic,gentle and sweet.I really hope n' pray you're okay in everything, Liam.Please keep positive.Always keeping you in my thoughts n' prayers.Keep your faith!Keep your love hopes n' follow your dreams always too:))Wishing you a very lovely weekend!In His light!God bless you always!:)Love n' hugs!xoxox D.^O^