Leaf Shower

Float Brown,green Orange, red

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/5/2015 4:05:00 PM

BARBARA, Dropped by to say hi and congratulate you on having your poem selected by Soup's Administration. This is a wonderful poem to have featured on the homepage. Have yourself a Happy Easter ~Always & Forever~ LINDA

Fritz Purdum

Date: 11/26/2008 8:48:00 AM

Short, smiple but my mind saw the downpour and fluttering of leaves-Fritz

Michael Degenhardt

Date: 11/26/2008 6:18:00 AM

This may be a simple read but it provides the imagery through color and a smooth flow. Very well written. Michael

Christopher Higgins

Date: 11/25/2008 7:42:00 PM

I love the picture that this creates. I am back to being a little boy in this piece, watching the leaves float in the stream, racing each other. Thank you for this write. Love, Chris.

Date: 11/25/2008 5:17:00 PM

So true. Love the title of this one. Enjoyed this poem. Happy Thanksgiving! Karen

Nigel Fawcett

Date: 11/25/2008 12:50:00 PM

That is so cute! and will keep me smiling 'til bedtime. Lovely write. Love, Nigel

Carrie Richards

Date: 11/25/2008 12:39:00 PM

Somebody go get the rake!!! ~ :) Carrie