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Laura

Your worshipped face transcends sweet heaven’s art As dusk’s soft brush inspires the dying sun Its winsome stroke etch prose within my heart This wanting yearn becomes undone Vast waves of passion, surging past their shores Immerse my thoughts in pulsing streams Beyond this wistful world and yours Fates metered hand surely binds our dreams But O, my soul’s sharp thorns impale this need A bloodless wound, more precious than my life Love’s fevered bite, its poisoned reed I wallow in this joyful pain and strife No scent or graze will this man find We’ve only loved, within my mind 1-20-2014 My 1st poem posted on PS and my first ever attempt at a Sonnet. I remember being surprised to get such a warm welcome and comments so fast

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Date: 5/18/2020 4:56:00 PM
Love’s fevered bite, its poisoned reed I wallow in this joyful pain and strife No scent or graze will this man find We’ve only loved, within my mind...awesome!
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David Mohn
Date: 5/18/2020 5:26:00 PM
thank you Kim...much appreciated. Thanks for checking out my first poem at PS :)
Date: 3/8/2015 12:42:00 PM
David, Congratulations, on your fine win. <3 LINDA <3
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Date: 3/5/2015 10:18:00 PM
David, CONGRATULATIONS, on your Beginnings Matter Win ~SKAT~
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Date: 3/4/2015 2:49:00 PM
dropping back with my congrats - so glad to see I read this, your first poem here:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 10/22/2014 4:35:00 PM
wow, such a romantic poem. I enjoyed seeing your first post here!!
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Date: 4/25/2014 2:02:00 AM
beautifully written sonnet. Hugs Jan x
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David Mohn
Date: 4/25/2014 12:29:00 PM
Thanks very much Jan :)
Date: 2/1/2014 9:08:00 PM
You are talented indeed. Thank you for sharing this wonderful sonnet.
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David Mohn
Date: 2/2/2014 4:38:00 PM
Thanks Carolina :) I really appreciate that
Date: 1/21/2014 1:10:00 PM
David, Your first poem on the soup is excellent for the readers!! Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND". Hugs* SKAT
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Date: 1/21/2014 4:47:00 AM
- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup,David - I choose your first great poem and hope you will write many more in the future - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- PoetrySoup Rule1: Be kind and keep PoetrySoup a haven. PoetrySoup is a drama free zone(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 1/20/2014 11:00:00 PM
David, , A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. You will enjoy the community, we are one big happy family. (Drama & Love. LOL) ~ Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@
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