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            Live until the red light of Death stops you, then... get your last ticket.






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  1. Date: 1/23/2013 3:44:00 PM
    Finally something I haven't read of yours, now, now it shouldn't be that hard! WRITE!! dern you..oopsie I turned int the head mistress ;) Interesting epigram..give us a new free verse? Light & Love

  1. Date: 10/19/2012 9:07:00 AM
    One way I guess.

  1. Date: 10/14/2012 12:24:00 PM
    Your an original my friend. Wonderful piece. Michael

  1. Date: 10/12/2012 6:12:00 AM
    Soupmail :) LOL

  1. Date: 10/10/2012 3:58:00 PM
    Hi, there, Ruben. glad you liked my texting poem which I totally translated from google! Hey, why are you not doing some tankas for that tanka contest. Would love to see some from you!!

  1. Date: 10/10/2012 6:58:00 AM
    soupmail :)

  1. Date: 10/8/2012 7:05:00 AM
    Ruben did you see? I brought Nikko back lol Interesting one you got here :) your comments made me smile when I wasn't at the Soup :)

  1. Date: 10/7/2012 4:11:00 AM
    Ok I am weird. I noticed the periods at the top left and bottom left part-- Are those ticket holes perhaps? I know, that's another stretch...Told you I am weird :p. Don't mind me.

  1. Date: 10/7/2012 4:09:00 AM
    Thank you, Ruben for the words of wisdom here. And that you made me smile with it, too :D! As my captcha says (ummm maybe in a pirate-y manner??) RSUM! Ok that is a stretch but it sounded like Awesome to me. Which it is. Enjoy your week, ok? Just dropping by to say hi!

  1. Date: 10/6/2012 2:53:00 PM
    Great read, Ruben... good luck!

  1. Date: 10/6/2012 9:39:00 AM
    hmmmnnn ..... very nice and great thought to ponder, Ruben. Thank you so much for sharing and good luck in the contest. Wishing you the biggest win!!! Thanks for the birthday greetings!!!! hugs:) Leonora

  1. Date: 10/5/2012 4:50:00 PM
    nice Sandy

  1. Date: 10/5/2012 2:23:00 AM
    Ruben, thanks for teaching me something new - well done !!! oxox love Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 10/4/2012 10:51:00 PM
    Extremely well penned this one. Good luck with the contest. So loved the read!

  1. Date: 10/4/2012 8:21:00 PM
    Excellent write here Ruben!Love this.Best wishes.

  1. Date: 10/4/2012 2:34:00 PM
    yeooow, ruben...the imagery through emotion is so very grasping here!... good job and a winner for me!..:) huggs

  1. Date: 10/4/2012 2:17:00 PM
    When I read this, the old Monkee song: The last train to Clarksville ran thru my mind, (I think that was its title). I hope we all get some decent tickets, Ruben!!! This is cool. And i'm glad you liked my monoku. Please put up MORE new stuff!!!(do you have anything about the new changes here that are bothering you?)

  1. Date: 10/4/2012 12:49:00 PM
    Very good, Ruben.

  1. Date: 10/4/2012 11:29:00 AM
    Cute! ..Got a chuckle..Enjoyed...Sara

  1. Date: 10/4/2012 10:47:00 AM
    hey Ruben, great Epigram, and yes some folk strive all thier lives for that ticket,, thanks for the comment on chuck berry, mainly about all his million sellers long before ding a ling......

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