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Last Night

I dreamed looking into loves eyes sun smiling dazzling alive so very beautiful the sunshine always arrives sparkling you love Dancing in each others breaths holding hands always blown away by this dream the happiest my heart has ever been the two of us were truly one In the clouds I was getting to know you what an amazing truly wonderful person holding hands the two us felt right Inside golden sands sweeping most beautiful of all memories Treasure kissing you from the heart and soul a snowflake melting on the warmth of your beauty silver dew of dawning The very day you said that you loved me just drifting faraway into distant thoughts A wind howling crying winter lashing of the panes sharing an awful storm its the worst winds I have ever heard

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 12/10/2014 8:15:00 AM
Amazing and haunting piece.
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Date: 12/10/2014 6:39:00 AM
Awesome! This poem is so very beautiful Liam!Just wonderful! A 7 +++! Thank you for writing and posting this one.Have a very wonderful and peaceful day Liam, my dearest friend. :) Love and hugs! xoxxxox D.
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 12/13/2014 4:46:00 PM
thank you dorian for the truly wonderful comment dear friend bless you deeply appreciated
Date: 12/9/2014 10:58:00 PM
Wow very beautiful write Liam, A7
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 12/13/2014 3:35:00 PM
dazzling comment arthur my eyes popped out have a great weekend pal

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