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                                                         last journey---
                                              dead bodies draped in white 
                                                     waiting in a queue

 *Scene from a burning ghat (crematorium)


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  1. Date: 8/2/2012 12:21:00 AM
    kach... Congratulations with your awesome win in Susan's waiting contest... what a ;-) ~xox PD

  1. Date: 8/1/2012 1:53:00 PM
    Congratulations on your placement in Susan's "Wait" contest Kash. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 7/31/2012 11:36:00 AM
    ((()))Congrats on your very expressive and emotive winning work..Sara

  1. Date: 7/31/2012 9:02:00 AM
    wow what a visual Kash.. super congrats on a brilliant write and win luv..

  1. Date: 7/31/2012 6:31:00 AM
    Awesome piece,Kash...great write...Congratulations on your superb win..Kudos to your friend...

  1. Date: 7/31/2012 1:19:00 AM
    deep, congratulations Kash xx

  1. Date: 7/30/2012 11:58:00 PM
    wow this is deep...many congrats Kash.

  1. Date: 7/30/2012 5:22:00 PM
    Excellent write, Kash! It gave me shivers...congrats on your win! Love and Blessings, Rhonda

  1. Date: 7/30/2012 4:06:00 PM
    Great Job!!! Enjoyed your write<3 Bean

  1. Date: 7/30/2012 2:43:00 PM
    Wonderful haiku Kash, Congratulations on your win................ Lov, Shar

  1. Date: 7/30/2012 2:35:00 PM
    Kash, congrats on your win, I loved this frist time, just excellent..David

  1. Date: 7/30/2012 2:05:00 PM
    Congratulations on your win with this unusual haiku, Kach

  1. Date: 7/30/2012 2:03:00 PM
    unbearably sad but a wonderful entry. congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce

  1. Date: 7/18/2012 11:15:00 AM
    Such an odd day to read this one, Kash...My friend just passed a few hours ago and tomorrow will be his day "in queue." You make poetry so interesting to read...enjoy visiting your poetry regularly, friend...gwendolen

  1. Date: 7/13/2012 5:29:00 AM
    I worked in a cemetery in my youth.....I remember the nice guy who ran the "under-ground" crematorium...repeated every sentence twice/repeated every sentence twice...asked me once if I wanted some joke....thanks for comments! Kash...jimbo

  1. Date: 7/10/2012 12:16:00 PM
    a sad journey indeed...great write Kash... thanks for visiting and commenting

  1. Date: 7/10/2012 12:20:00 AM
    Kash, you are at it again. you'd think this would be the one thing in life where we wouldn't be in a queue.

  1. Date: 7/9/2012 9:20:00 PM
    I really like this one. Is this how all of India do burials, Kash? I think cremation is a good way.

  1. Date: 7/9/2012 7:30:00 PM
    An interesting poem about the end of this life.

  1. Date: 7/9/2012 5:00:00 PM
    very vivid and sad. nice poem...