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Last Goodbyes

Nobody knew it would be their last goodbye On a day not unlike many others The sun still ascending into the sky Waving goodbye to their fathers and mothers No warning to give a prolonged hug Or to repeat, “I love you” again No reason to put aside the coffee mug To kiss them as the day did begin Nobody knew of the tragedy just hours away And the thin ice upon which we walk The torment of wondering if your child is okay The breaking of a parent’s heart Watching parent and child reunited While others still stand there alone Feeling guilty to be so excited That your child will be coming home Twenty plus angels ascended to heaven On the river of a nation’s tears Be thankful for every day you are given To hug your children throughout the years

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 12/20/2012 1:43:00 PM
wow great minds must think alike I just wrote a poem called mortals bleed. about the same subject. Your rendition is a lot better then mine :)
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Date: 12/18/2012 10:16:00 AM
Joe, really difficult subject, very well done...David
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Date: 12/17/2012 7:52:00 PM
A heartbreaking write that touches the soul, thanks for writing this and sharing. Hugs
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Date: 12/17/2012 7:38:00 PM
this is an awesome poem about a very tragic event. One of the best I have read here on this topic. Bless you for writing a poem this sincere, Joe.
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