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Last Essence

A whisper slips softly by From the lips of sweet beauty She begins to cry Embrace the magic of this moment And dry her tears For the whisper was of love To conquer her fears An essence that has come From heaven above Filling your life with unmistakable joy Something you haven"t felt sinse you were a boy Now a man hardened from life Embrace the essence And make her your wife Wriiten by Joseph Adam Burchett 12/22/11

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Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 12/22/2011 7:23:00 AM

A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you this morning Joseph. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Read and comment on their's and they will return in kind. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love and blessing always, Carol

Rockman Pritts

Date: 12/21/2011 10:52:00 PM

Nice write Joseph. Very sincere. If I might make a few suggestions though, they would be... An essence that has COME and... HAVEN'T felt SINCE you WERE a boy. Still a good read though. Thanks for sharing. Rockman